Doki Doki Literature Club Good Ending Guide
Hello, former board owner here. Gg have fun, I am Glad Mans #6284 on discord if you are someone I know from any of the doki servers from a while back. Anonymous 07/29/18 (Sun) 20:53:14 No.
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Doki Doki Literature Club Good Ending Guidelines
Mods must state they are unaffiliated with DDLC and have a link to the original game. Mods must not be distributed as complete games with executables.Tag spoilers in posts or comments. For comment spoilers, put: !Just Monika! This was pretty neat, certainly everyone who's played wants that opportunity to 'save' the characters. Some of the options made me raise an eyebrow but I can tell a lot of thought went into it so you get props regardless.I think the biggest problem with your additions is that your style of writing is noticeably different from Salvato's. An amount of this is to be expected from any mod, but you could help yourself by not using so many slang contractions like 'gonna', 'wanna'.There are also a few straight up grammatical problems; I'd like to be more constructive and show you where those are and what needs fixing but I didn't have the wherewithal to take notes while I was playing. I'd like to be able to pinpoint exact places in the script I remember there being grammatical errors but the truth is, they were pretty consistent straight through the experience where you added dialog.Let me be clear, I like what you've done.
The real reason I decided to comment at all is because I like it so much I want you to make it all that it can be. I'm sorry I can't be more helpful but I hope these little criticisms point you in the right direction!. I'm definetly going to update this at a later date, with some tiny little stuff added, and a lot of improved and revised texts. Binding of isaac character unlocks.
As I stated, I'm not natively english, nor have I the level to consider myself 'great', so there is this much I can do by myself.I've been talking to REALLY great people about the gramatical issues, so I will update this post once it's been improved. For those who have already played the mod, I'll release a video containing all the added stuff, so you don't need to replay the game, unless it's so big of an improvement that it's enough excuse, that is.I'm really grateful for the time you took to pinpoint all this, and thanks for allowing me to grow this project more. My thoughts throughout:.
Act I was a little boring, since it was pretty much the same as original Act I, up until. I was immensely satisified when. But holy hell, did I rage when. Similar to Act I, Act II was pretty much the same up until. OHHHH YEAH. Act III is some gooooooood shit.
Natsuki was incredibly well-written (albeit the grammar errors, but like you said, you're not a native speaker, so it's not a huge deal). The interlude where.
This act had a nice end. Oh boy, Act IV. Yay! Act V!.All in all, great job, OP. 9/10.EDIT: Oh shit,. I am glad, I stumbled upon this mod.The story simply was not finished, there was no way to an ending nor to make the characters happy.
Every path led to nothing but hurt. However, I thought it was somehow implied that one should make their own ending (there was this easter egg where the mc asks you to go back to tell them, but you can't really change something, aside from the final dialogue).This writ contains spoilers. If you haven't played the mod yet, it goes the same as for the original game: Just play it, it's free.I don't want to write a wall of text so I will just list it.Things I found good:. You stuck to the nature of the characters, they felt real and it didn't appear forced at all to save them. As opposed to the main story, you involved multiple side-characters, giving the story a more natural feel. (even more than the original game actually has, which in itself is kinda funny). You conveyed feelings, moods and vibes through the interface ( eg.
Natsuki's, when Monika starts blabbing, whenever someone was cut short and the text skips, the zooming to the character etc.). You added much detail ( All the unwritten stuff that you elaborated, e.g. When the MC learned he could see above Natsuki's shoulders while kneeling, The life of the MC and how he hadn't eaten something cooked for so long, his relation to his mother. How the club room was used formerly by the debate club and so forth.). You kept the game interesting, build tension and so onAlso this part made me like Yuri.When I first played the game I would go for Natsuki not only because she was so cute, but also because I thought it would be odd dating his childhood friend that one knew for so long, which changed when she confessed and so on. In act II, I was exasperated by both Yuri and Monika, who would become so unreasonable and egotistic (pulling me away from what I cherished!).
But when the MC (I don't know if this was part of the mod or I just noticed it due to an additional playthrough, which I wondered several times actually.) and it made me think higher of her.What also was ingenious, was the way to safe Monika.Now, I am truly able to say 'all doki best doki' (Natsuki's still my favorite, though ).I think I saw what you were trying to do, and I liked every single bit. There really was nothing one could say you did wrong.I didn't mind the grammar and spelling mistakes, but this might be irrational as I am not native english myself.It's easy to see that there was put a lot of effort, love and care into this mod.I don't mean to exaggerate, but no words nor numbers can describe how much I liked this mod, that somehow felt as though it must have been canon.And to you, who granted so many people a way to find happiness, my most sincere gratitude.Now that I have finished the mod, I have found a bit of closure. Although I still worry about, but that will be some sort of cliffhanger, right?(Well, turned out to be a wall of text after all). In the Yuri part, i thinked it was the same, but actually it was a really smart thing to do, the upper option says 'cut yourself!!' , and the second, just cut yourself, the first time i clicked the first cause of the '!!'
, but after that, i knew what that means, through the game, every text that someone speaks is wrote between ', meaning that was a speech, the first option you say to Yuri cut itself, but the second was a act, you choose to cut yourself (the MC), so you put your hand and hold the knife, cutting your hand, all makes sense now.